Tiny little steps
Climb slowly and more slowly
dear tell….who am I

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  1. Tiny little steps 5 s
    Climb slowly and the slowly 7 s, but you cannot say the slowly
    Who Iam dear? you tell me. 7 s should be 5 s.

    I am thinking that Iam is a typo? However, this is a senryu, not a haiku. With much respect, I have written what conforms to the 5,7,5, format and have corrected the grammar, I don’t think I have lost your intention in asking the question, who am I? Please note I have stayed within the traditional rules no punctuation, no capitals/uppercase, ellipses are permitted.

    tiny little steps
    climb slowly and more slowly
    dear tell … who am I
    © Rashmi Sortur 2017 the copyright is yours, only my neighbours steal poetry 🙂

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